Potential Taglines

Below is a list of potential taglines that I will us in my teaser trailer and put on my poster. By looking at existing thriller films taglines I was able to grasp a better understanding of what kind of words were suitable and appropriate for the genre.

• Time has come 
• 1 down 2 to come 
• He was here 
• He's out 
• Your dead 
• Wait for revenge 
• They thought they were safe 
• Once he comes for you. Run while you can
• Stay close, I am watching you 
• There you are
• Are you ready for revenge 
• This is for ...... 
• Are you scared, you should be 
• We used to be friends, know were enemies 
• Fear can keep you as a hostage, Hope can set you free 
• Arise the revenge
• Prison only makes you stonger 
• Running always seems to be the easiest option 
• They're coming for you, Run while you can                                                               

To decide what my tagline to my film will be, I decided to have a focus group between 10 people. I had 19 suggestions of which I got people in the focus group to rate the name out of 10 (1 being worst and 10 being the best), I then took the average number out of 10 for each suggestion.

These were the raw results from the survey:


Title                                                                                                               Average Rating

Time has come                                                                                                        5.8
1 down 2 to come                                                                                                    5.3
He was here                                                                                                             4.8
He's out                                                                                                                    3.5
Your dead                                                                                                                4.2
Wait for revenge                                                                                                      6.2
They thought they were safe                                                                                    6.4
Run while you can                                                                                                   5.9
Stay close, I am watching you                                                                                 5.6
There you are                                                                                                           2.4
Are you ready for revenge                                                                                       3.4
This is for ……                                                                                                        4.5
Are you scared, you should be                                                                                 2.8
We used to be friends, know were enemies                                                              4.2
Fear can keep you as a hostage, Hope can set you free                                            8.2
Arise the revenge                                                                                                      4.2
Prison only makes you stronger                                                                                6.2
Running always seems to be the easiest option                                                         5.5
Once he comes for you. Run while you can                                                              9.5
They're coming for you, Run while you can                                                              9.8                              

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They're coming for you, Run while you can